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One night there was a girl named Leanna. She was sprinting through the forest. She stopped at this tall tower that punched through the dark skies. Then a blur came out of the only window landing in front of Leanna. She saw clearly that it was a wolf. She stared at it in confusing. He grabbed her and jumped into the only window that went into the tower. When they got inside there was a warm small room there was candles flickering and there was a warm bed with a bright fire place. He threw Leanna onto the bed getting close starting to sink his teeth into her chest. It felt like 100 bolts of electicty flowing threw her body. She felt brick cold but boiling hot at the same time. She had a vision of the wolf kissing her neck lightly. Than he took his teeth out of her neck which made her a little upset cuz she loved the way it felt. Than the wolf finally spoke. "Now you get some sleep young one" He said in a deep voice. He kissed her neck very lightly and sweetly. And she fell asleep in love with the wolf. It has seemed that the wolf was in love with her back. And the night crept on!
(( soon there will be a chapter 2 so stay tuned)) And add comments please! =)
- by black ice 09 |
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- | Submitted on 01/29/2011 |
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- Title: The caring wolf.
- Artist: black ice 09
- Description: Just a quick love story about a wolf who had somthing for a lady named Leanna
- Date: 01/29/2011
- Tags: dark wing
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Evil Percy - 03/24/2011
- I don't want to be harsh but I didn't like it. My main problem is that I don't get it. It would've been better if the wolf would have just been a companion in a cool adventure or something but instead the story takes a turn to mimic a lame, obiously Twilight-inspired romance. If there is going to be a chapter 2 drop the woman-wolf love story and go for a beauty and the beast inspired story or drop the romance for a while in this. 1/4 stars. 13% approval. Trash rating.
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- iDinoCupcake - 01/29/2011
- What the hell girl how can this girl named leanna like the fact this nasty wolf has its nasty teeth in her neck. When she clearly dosnt even know who the hell this thing is ok . But so far it is so interesting and i must clearly stay tunned because have already decided to freking read it .
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