If I Fell For You

• Artist: WorIds
• Description: it's a poem i wrote in the begfinning of 8th grade...well,more towards the beginning than the end anyways,over a guy Ilike and am currently dating.I always liked this poem for some reason and decided to post it.Please rate and leave a comment on whether or not you like it and where you think it could improve!^_^ Well,anyways I hope you enjoy it!^^
• Date: 06/10/2009
• Tags: fell heart

If you hurt me,
I'll be fine.
If you take my heart,
It's still mine.
If you made me fall for you,
How would you start?
If I fell for you,
Would you catch me,
Or would you break my heart?






~~~Aimee ~9/21/08~



[ heart or crying ???]

Comments

[ff2testjan28]

highschool

[mandk13]

wow I love it

[WorIds]

Thank you,again ^_^ I'm glad you like my work ^_^

[Tomas Youngblood]

nice poem.....i like it. 5/5, definitly.

[WorIds]

@goddess of water09:Um...no sorry I'm not.Trust me if I was I'd have MUCH better poetry that this.But thank you for such a conplement smile It's nice that you think of my poetry as that good ^.^

[goddess of water09]

it was genius are you shakesperes daughter????

[Taste of a Raindrop]

Hmm. Lovely. I like how the speaker in this poem approaches this person. 4/5