the dark hallway

• Artist: BR souljakid
• Description: the hallway turns into pure darkness during night, but stays the sameduring day.
• Date: 05/24/2009
• Tags: darkhallway

as i walked to class, a dark hallway stood infront of me. the hallway had been abandond for 6 years now, andallegedly said it was haunted by the spirits of the 6th year yr 7s.As i walked through this hallway, i heard screeming and the sence of fear stuck my heart like thunder.the darkness was blank black in midnight's light.the lockers rattled and i felt like someone, or some thing was following me. it moved as quick as electricity and stared at me with bright eyes shining like a tourch. finaly i made it to the creek of light andthe darkness seemed to leed me to the beast infront of me.

Comments

[Hateful Sprite]

OMG! @ my grandmas house there is this abandoned part of a highschool and once my cousin and I went in to explore it (me and my cousin were cool and I swear there was something there! It was dark and I herad screams and stuff! IT WAS SCARY AS HECK!

[Angelofrock09]

At least capalize every begining of the sentence.

[kisara666]

I must say this is a good school flashback.
It's scary like most schools are haha. I gotta be a little bit of a critic, sadly, but you should re-spell some of the words in here and it would make it just that much better.
I'm gonna give a 5/5 just 'cuz it's still really good even with a couple of minor errors, good job dude!