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“Rue!” “Rue get out here, hurry” screamed Rue’s mother.
Rue’s mother was a tall woman with beautiful pale skin and lovely sky blue
eyes and long blonde hair. Wearing a long blue-gray dress wrapped by dark
blue ribbons around her neck was a pearl necklace in the middle of the pearls
was a wooden cross, on her feet were dark blue sandals. Rue was a little girl
she had red hair in two long pig tails, her eyes were bright blue, and her skin
was pale. Wearing a long white dress, flat white shoes and around her neck
was a black cross. Hanging on her shoulder was a school bag and in her arms
was a box she held to her tightly “Mama” Rue said. “Well, well look who
arrive.” Said the man, he was tall, handsome olive skin, long brown hair
braided into a small ponytail, but the worst was his eyes, red as ruby. The
man was wearing a brown shirt, brown pants and black shoes. “Don’t you
dare put one finger on her!” Rue’s mother screamed trying to get the man off
her. “Oh, I’m not going to hurt her.” The man told her still looking at Rue. “I’m
going to make her suffer before I kill her.” He said now looking at Rue’s
mother “WHAT!” Screamed Rue’s mother in ranged trying again to shake off
the man, but the man was to strong and fast. “Watch closely my dear.” The
man said to Rue as he leaded his head toward her mother’s neck, he opened
his mouth revealing his fangs. Then his fangs pierced the skin on her mother’s
neck, Rue felt she was going to scream but instead she vomited, seeing her
Mother’s blood being drunk by someone other then her dad was too much.
When she was done vomiting she looked at her mother Rue saw that her
mother had gotten paler and she was getting even paler her eyes like her
husbands were empty. The man moved his head away letting the drained
body of the woman fall to ground. “MAAAAAMMMMMAAAA!” Rue screamed out
as she woke up seeing she was in her room next to her was a woman. She
was tall with beautiful pale skin, she had bright green eyes, and her hair
black. The woman was wearing a black sweater covering a white blouse, gray
pants and on her feet were white high heel pumps. “Are you ok Miss Rue?”
ask the woman looking worried. “Thank you Ms. Cheryl, but you shouldn’t
worry.” Said Rue in a tired voice, then suddenly she remembered what today
was. “God today the day isn’t it?” she asked, Ms. Cheryl nodded yes.
- by -Jacxie-NYC- |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/19/2008 |
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- Title: Red Priness Intro
- Artist: -Jacxie-NYC-
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Description:
I'm writing a book, this is the intro
you will be able to read the rest in my journal
please tell me what you think. - Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: priness intro vampires
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Comments (5 Comments)
- iMishux - 08/04/2009
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pretty good but maybe be more descriptive? i mean i can picture what you are trying to say but i dont really feel it ><
3/5 but still really good keep at it ;3 - Report As Spam
- xxMisty_visionsxx - 05/17/2009
- good!
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- puppylove600 - 04/18/2009
- kewl smile
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- CaucasianNoodles - 04/08/2009
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very good
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- tucker50 - 11/12/2008
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awsome
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