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1 day there was a littel boy.he was playing in the woods.His mom said he had an hour to play.Well his mom lost track of time.Insted of an hour it was 4 hours.She went out side and called for him.She called and called and called .But he did not come she looked and looked.she called the cops they sent out a serach team.1 week later the called and said they could not find him.But he was there the hole time.the first hour he was playing he feel of the swing and died.He came back to life and puled the body into the woods up a tree.He was only three years old.but he did not no he was daed.(spooky)
Evey time it thundered he would cry and get scared.But his mom did not hear him.Well the momther didnt no he was dead until she killed her self gonk
She saw him up in heaven and was so happy she found her son
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- by xX_Hot_Teddy_Xx |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/27/2008 |
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- Title: the lost boy
- Artist: xX_Hot_Teddy_Xx
- Description: i cant tell
- Date: 10/27/2008
- Tags: lost
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Captain-Failsalot - 08/14/2009
- This is bad... I could barely understand what was going on and too many spelling errors. And using a smiley in a story is not the best way to convey feeling. So 1 star. Have a good day.
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- gyfie - 06/06/2009
- this has so many mess ups...and spelling errors...
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- Dalton01Baby - 04/30/2009
- it is non fiction be.. wait.. what the. this IS fiction i got this under fiction but it says non fiction which means it is true
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- Incredible Nightcrawler - 11/12/2008
- Why didn't he just go back home if he didn't know he was dead?
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- puhlayed - 11/11/2008
- ? How is this non-fiction?
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