Lost and Found

• Artist: Layla_BumbleBee
• Description: How lost someone can feel until they meet the right person.
• Date: 09/09/2009
• Tags: lost

Darkness surrounds me
Chills run down my spine
The wind echos through the hollow feeling in my heart
I cry from pain and lonlyness.
Something warm touches my face.
I close my eyes and let the light flow over me
The tears slowy stop and a smile appears
I look into the eyes of my true love
As the emptyness melts away

Comments

[Xxpandy_gives_hugglezxX]

gmo thats me!! 4/5

[Layla_BumbleBee]

Well I liked my own work and it came from the heart....this is a turn thing....i wanted others to knowt he anything is possible when it comes to a ttue love...l..

[Panic Taka]

Pros: very well outlined and written, seems heart felt yet on the other hand
Cons: it seems as if very blissful and almost naive.

overrall its lack of originality and feel make it 3/5.

i liked it. :>