- Lily has always been your average teenage girl. Or so she thought. You see, Lily has always been interested in the supernatural. She believes she gets it from her aunts. Aunt Verdona and Aunt Sonia own a psychic shop where they sell tarot and palm readings along with crystals, potions, and many books on the supernatural. Lily could have gotten it from her only two friends, Frankie and Luna. Frankie and Lily met when Frankie applied for a job at her aunts’ store reading tarot cards. Luna was just an outcast who likes the undead so they all started hanging out and now they’re the best of friends. One day at lunch the three friends were talking. “Why does everyone stare at us like we’ve got some disease” Lily asked with a sigh. “They treat us like we’re freaks” Luna added. “They’re the freaks, there’s nothing wrong with us” Frankie replied with his famous smirk that could make anyone smile. There are things they start to notice about each other when they’re best friends. Frankie notices that both Lily and Luna think they’re incredibly plain looking but in reality they look better than most girls. Lily has long blonde hair that she straightens out to go with all the black and red she wears. She thinks she looks scary but it just makes her look unique. Luna dresses the same but she has brown hair and she wears blue and black instead of red. She looks just as good as Lily but they both pull that look off differently. Luna and Lily both notice that Frankie never really fits in with them. He’s to athletic to hang out with them but he has to since no one will get to know him other than the guy who reads tarot cards and likes the supernatural. There’s a lot more to all of them but no one every gives them the chance to show it. Like the fact that Lily is incredibly smart, she’s one of the top students in her class. And Luna has so many after school activities that she practically runs everything. But Frankie has always been great at sports. One day when Lily was walking home from school she heard a stick snap behind her.
- by iKaizerInkunaOrihime |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/23/2010 |
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- Title: Night of the abyss
- Artist: iKaizerInkunaOrihime
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- Date: 07/23/2010
- Tags: night abyss
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- Oreo Stealer - 01/07/2011
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This is pretty good! =)
I was interested in some parts and bored in others, & I feel like the constant repetition of names was part of my distraction. Try to tie your sentences a little better, and instead of Frankie (Talks about Frankie) Frankie(again) Try Frankie (whatever goes here.) He...
This could go places though. wink - Report As Spam