- it was a dark rainy night as a i stood staring at a man with a black hoodie and bleached white jeans i asked him "what do you want" He said "what is reality is it life is it death or is it just a dream" then he disappeared into darkness i called out " what does that mean" his looming voice answered "you'll know soon enough" as i started to walk away something hit me behind and i passd out, when i awoke it was morning i looked out my window and said "it must have been a dream" i had just put on my school clothes when i heard someone yell hurry up allready Drake" i looked out the window and saw my friend Rose she shouted "hurry up or we'll miss class" so I ran out the door and down the hall out onto the fields of Kagasaki University, she had waited for about 30 minutes there so i had to make it up to her so i ran by the nearest coffee shop and bought us some coffee when i gave her; her coffee she asked me "did you study" i asked "study for what" she said "exams, and finales are next week" i looked at her and said "thats today aw man i didnt even get a chance to study" she giggled as we where walking into math class the teacher said "your late again how many times has that been this week" i said "about four times and im really sorry" he said "don't worry about it just get in your seats" a friend of mine Yoto leaned over and asked "is that a new look of yours" he pointed to my neck i asked "why, is there some thing wrong with my neck" i reached up and felt my neck there was a collar around my neck, Rose pulled out a mirror and gave it to me, i tilted it towards my neck and there it was a black collar with a white metal plate with the name Chaos written on it i tryed pulling it off but it wouldn't come off so i gave up and left it on, it was about eight when i finally got out of school yoto asked me "are you coming to the party to night i said "sorry man i gotta study for finales" he said "allright but there gonna be mixing white russians tonight" i said "ok ill come but for one drink thats it" he said "allright now your talkin". It was around six, I got around and started to walk out the door when my neck started to burn i reached up and the collar was now embeded with spikes, an hour later the burning had stopped i went back in my dorm and looked in the mirror my neck was a little black, the black burn started to become ink like and started moving to my back i took off my shirt and watched it, it spelled out: what is reality is it life is it death or is it just a dream i said to myself "this must be a dream ive gotta snap out of this" i looked at the mirror it was still there but it now looked like a tattoo all the ink was gone, so i went to the party, i got there and the guy at the door stopped me and searched me for any weapons, he told me "go on in", my friend yoto came up to me with a whole pitcher full of white russian i said " i told you i was only gonna have one drink" he said "yeah i know and heres your drink" he pointed to the pitcher i said "allright but im warnin' you this is gonna get crazy maybe even crazier than last time" he said "shut up and drink, and whats up with the collar its got spikes now, oh well lets get to drinking" i turned to look at the crowd and he asked " when did you get the tattoo" i said" what oh yeah that i got it last week" he said "okay also why arent you wearin' a shirt" i look down at my bare chest and said "crap" i chugged down the pitcher and told yoto "fill it up and make it deadly" he asked "what do you mean deadly" i said "you know how you normally get rid of the pestly cats and dogs but make it in white russian form" he said " you must be joking" he gave me that look as if saying what the ******** I said " just make it" he said "okay but you better not die on me" i said "okay but make it ten times the regular dose then" he shook his head and annonced to the dj to lower the music and bring up the table the dj said "why do you need the table" yoto said " my friend has decided he wants to drink a white russian ten times the hundred percentage" the dj asked "is he crazy" yoto said "yeah kinda" the dj said "okay but im gonna call the paramedics just in case" yoto said okay" the dj lowered the music and announced " yo yo yo everybody this crazy son of a gun named Drake has decided to drink thousand proof white russian so lets give a hand to him" the table came up and everybody started clappin, i got out there toward the table and yoto brought over the whole pitcher, somebody from the crowd said "call the paramedics" the dj announced "there on the way" i picked up the pitcher and started to chug i heard a shout from the crowd "you can do it Drake" i stopped and coughed then started again, a few seconds later i was finished, i raised the pitcher into the air and everybody started to cheer. rose had just came in when the dj announced "hes done it, hes really done it holy crap, first time ever in this clubs life man you know we gotta put his picture on the wall" rose asked somebody from the crowd "whats happening" The guy said "your boy Drake just drank a whole pitcher of thousand proof white russian" she ran over to me and asked "Are you crazy, you could have gotten yourself killed" i said yeah "im crazy but i really needed it".
- by chaos_moon_rose2323 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/09/2010 |
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- Title: 1st chapter new book
- Artist: chaos_moon_rose2323
- Description: please forgive the language and stuff but this is my first chapter of my new book i have made mistakes which i'm glad someone told me and hope you'll help me correct them in the future this is my first book, i'm planning on correcting most of this before i try to publish it but if i cant get it published then ill put the rest of the chapters in my journal so please be patient and if you see any mistakes then tell me but please do not right dumb comments like how stupid it is or stuff like that.
- Date: 11/09/2010
- Tags: book first chapter
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- kelpandy - 12/23/2010
- i like it, but you might wanna consider some periods....
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