The Last Fight

• Artist: Tala Defenrir
• Description: Well it pretty much speaks for it self how I felt , but I always wanted to write something where the ending isn't quite clear. where the reader had to choose which way it was meant. Tell me what ya think.
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: last fight

The Last Fight

Her world crumbling down
her heart dropped and stomped to the ground
his eyes so cold as he looks at her
like ice piercing straight through her
the demon has woken inside of him
roaring like a beast claws as sharp as nails
clawing through her flesh
grasping at her soul skin on fire body tired
she crawls into a dark hole
curls up in a ball as the tears begin to fall
looking now at the damage he had done
now he felt like total scum
crawling into the hole
what he had done tugging at his soul
apologizing for all the wrong he did to her
he told her he loved her then a brief silence
she smiled and he then smiled back
as she told him "I love you too but..." her
eyes then grew cold "we're done "
as she then pulled the trigger of the gun

Comments

[justcallmejack]

wow im speakles.......
thats really good!!well its more then good!!!!!!!
wish i could write like that...

i think she killed her self so they both could be free...
then i think he picked up the gun and killed himself.
so he didnt have 2 live with the pain of wut he did 2 her.
and then they met on the "OTHER SIDE"
and fell in luv all over again.in a place where u cant feel pain.

[xox_Cherry_Babe_xox]

WOW. thats was amazing really deep and it paints such a picture.

I feel sorry for this girl yet shes finally free.
This is really deep and really gd ive looked for a writer who can take my breath away and your wow.

[Tala Defenrir]

thx guys smile My question is what did u figure the end meant ? I mean what do u think happened? I am curious. thx again guys

[rich milk chocolate]

wow thats deep. i imagined it really happening. i really like it.

[xAntoinex]

wow,ur deep!its awsome

[Ruff Kitten]

awesome! 5/5