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My precious ones,
so brightly coloured.
My beautiful roses,
for my eyes only.
I care for them,
love them when alone.
My rose garden,
holding My cherished ones.
One starts to wither!
is it My fault?
what do I do?
what have I done?
My garden slowly dissolves,
turning to ashes...
I'm all alone...
Nothing to love,
Nothing to love me....
- by Avatar_Aiko |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: My Rose Garden
- Artist: Avatar_Aiko
- Description: This poem describes a feeling of isolation and how people can sometimes become possessive of their loved ones in fear of loosing them. It expresses how they treasure those special people and cant stand others getting close to them.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: rose garden
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Comments (7 Comments)
- guinevere007 - 01/28/2009
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YOU GO GIRL!!
Thats funky wish my garden was like that...... - Report As Spam
- Zantessen - 12/11/2008
- That's beautiful sweety ! good luck !
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- Aioki Nova - 12/06/2008
- it's beautiful 5/5!!
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- Avatar_Aiko - 12/06/2008
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i capitalized "My" because the poem is about the character's feeling, so I wanted the poem to be centralized around them. By writing "My" with capitals i could make my audience relate to the character.
and the reason y the whole garden withers after just one starts to, is becuase once that euphoric idea -that u hav everything perfect in ur life - cracks, slowly ur whole worls starts to crumble... so the whole garden withers after 1 rose... - Report As Spam
- strawberri candy - 12/06/2008
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its so beautiful.. -cries-
Haha lol
Very good.. and.. er... symbolic.. O.o - Report As Spam
- Bittersweet Candycorn - 12/06/2008
- Nice poem aiko-chan ^_^ really liked it and its well composed too smile
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- oy oy oy 3 - 12/05/2008
- ^_^
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