BELONG

• Artist: Prince of reapers
• Description: this thing i wrote is a feeling ive had for a while i hope you enjoy and be honest and comment ^_^
• Date: 12/22/2008
• Tags: belong

everyone else belongs
i dont have a place in this world
my sufrage,my pain wont end
the tears that i shed hurt
i dont belong in this world

i cant go on breathing
i want to stop breathing
no one wants to set me free
i beg,and i beg not to be alive
no one wants to end me

i dont belong in this world
im useless i take up space
my existence is useless now
like a flame being put out
i cant take it anymore
i wanna die

Comments

[Rain Man816]

It's really good
but there is a place for you somewhere
You may not know me
But trust me

[Vyudali]

it feels like you are repeating the same thing over and over.....you kind are but idk.....otherwise its good......

[Prince of reapers]

Who doesnt like this one and i made a promise that i would never die so no worries

[Divine_Gurdian]

I like this poem. It reminds me of me. And please don't die or I'll cry and die.

[Prince of reapers]

thanks for the comments their nice but i wont let them get to me cause in this world their is no caring lol ^_^

[redlily the vampiress]

i like it smile but if u did die before me i would be kinda pissed off

[Zeera Irisis]

Aww, don't feel that way! There are people out there who care, there really are. *huggle*
Your poem was well-written, by the way. =3