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i walk in disgrace
with a lowered face,
fake smile in place
i cry with shame
and burn in pain
for my attempts were stupid and vain
your face burns my every thought
I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU, i cant say im not
if i try to keep you happy and lie
you discover the truth and cry
a broken heart, dead and cold
truth said bold
a love denied
a shattered heart cried
Time heals wounds, tis a lie
it just makes you strong enough to hide
the pain that rages deep within
im the lover of a Man Of Tin
so i walk, i cry, i burn
i think, i lie, you cry
time passes...
i hide
- Title: Pain
- Artist: atsyrk
- Description: pain love heart broken
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: pain
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Danika Miles - 10/27/2009
- Great job. I love this one too. I haven't been able to write lately I do not think I want to post my newest one it kinda sucks. Keep up the good work
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- Xx_YurLover_xX - 06/11/2009
- bloody fantastic
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- Stone^_^Rose - 12/29/2008
- This is quite nice. So full of raw emotion. The second to last stanza is my absolute favorite (though all of them were fairly good). Lovely use of the strike button (I've used it a few times in some of my own poems--that have yet to be posted >.< wink . The visual display of the phrase actually being scratched out adds a lot of power to that single line.
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- Gothic Mainiac - 12/27/2008
- Wow, I can really feel the emotion when I read this. It's very good.
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- Alaya Bone - 12/24/2008
- wow, that is all i can say, wow
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- _Roooose_ - 12/24/2008
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I read this poem earlier! xD
Forgot to comment, but your wrong, your better at writing poetry than me xD - Report As Spam
- krissys - 12/24/2008
- This is great very good job
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