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this was it
i was dying right before your eyes.
it wasnt your fault
i couldnt take another day of this hate.
now standing here, is this my fate?
to die in front of your caring eyes?
you know i was tired of the thousands of lies.
from the many people close to me
you were the most precious.
i can see
the tears well in your brown eyes.
as the blood flows from my wrists drown to the floor,
i fall into your arms.
hoping no harm
will come your way.
i slowly closed my eyes
and you kiss my forehead
and tell me one last....
...................................
im sorry
i love you too much to make you cry.
good bye, my love.
as i lay dead in your arms,
i remember hearing you say
this is not good bye
and i hear the slice of flesh,
and the warm blood.
some how i feel your lips as we drift
into the land of death.
so i guess this is not good bye.
i love you is the last thing he said.
- Title: the last thing
- Artist: BatzLove
- Description: i felt like posting this. so if u dont like it fine. just go away then. for those who actually like it, thank you.
- Date: 04/27/2009
- Tags: last thing
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Th3 PrInCeEsS - 06/08/2010
- -tearing- I loved this one too good work...5/5
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- BatzLove - 12/18/2009
- and to think this went through major editing before this...
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- Zane Gray 305 - 11/07/2009
- its outstanding very well put i love that ur like me speak ur mind n dnt hold anything back 5
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- Hysteria1667 - 07/19/2009
- holy s**t that was AWESOME!!!! 5 out of freaking 5!
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- havikdemond2 - 06/22/2009
- holy s**t...... purley ******** amazing! I REALLY FELT THE EMOTIONS
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