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Have you ever wondered why there are things we can't keep
And we fall from pressure and we sink so deep
Look at me, look at the way I was seated
I've been given a good life by the way that I was treated
I can't think , my mind's been restricted
But somehow I figured what I just depicted
To me you're a puppet, I control you in every way
I'm a strange phenomena that can't be explained
Yes, I am different in every way
I stay true, I'm cool, I rule
I'ma be me, you see you know how I do
My intellect is smart, yes one to be respected
Im'a good grader, I can take you all for granted
Can you find the meaning hidden inside of this song?
I bet the thoughts developing inside your mind is wrong
I'm not a maniac, nor even close to wretched
It's just with my conscious, my flow can't be contested
Nevertheless, it can't be corrected
Haters gonna think that it should be neglected
And a year later it's gonna be defected
Only because commoners like hypes gonna kill it
Then it won't be inspirational good music
No, I'm going to create a good movement
And show the fake rappers how to do this
If only I can be a sensation
I could have my ideas travel all over the nation
My mind floats like an extra-terrestria
I've even been called a philosopher
Understand just a little bit
If i were to philosophy this
Do you think your mind can handle it?
- Title: Phenomena
- Artist: lilandrez
- Description: 7th Rhyme. And you know what's amazing, people can rate, but they don't leave any insight. Or they read one thing, and not the next. It's really surprising. But whatever, this is my next edition, I will call it a composition after 20 rhymes, but I would like for someone to do artwork for a heading for these rhymes.
- Date: 04/14/2009
- Tags: phenomena junior lilandrez music lyrics
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xx_INomBabiesForFree_xx - 07/27/2009
- It was very good.
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- Centurion Tonitrius - 07/17/2009
- good idea and i would rate it a 4.5 for your true message
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- FoxfireAsaliEcara - 07/13/2009
- If you had allowed voting, I would have given you a four. Keep doing your thing and stay true to yourself.
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- Tiahm - 07/09/2009
- It was a litttle rough but ok i guess
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- TheSunshinecyanide - 07/05/2009
- philosophize you mean?? Maybe Im being overly critical but is this poem about being egotistical and making claims to being great at stuff? Im bored. B for effort I guess.
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- bubashubalub - 06/23/2009
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i thought that was awesome
so is it supposed to be a rap or a rhyme?
it has a little rough edges, but it has good meaning even though im not so sure what that meaning is......
i would so do the heading artwork for you but i dont exactly know how..
continue with it
later
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- sweet kaio12 - 06/21/2009
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