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When you tell me that you like her
I cheer you on, because that's what friends do
But can't you see the crack in my heart?
When you ask her out
I wish you all the luck in the world
But can't you see my tears that fall?
When you talk to her
I know you'll win her precious heart
But can't you see you've already have mine?
When you hug her tight
I take the picture for you
But you can't see I wish she were me
When you kiss her lips
I tell you that you're very brave
But you can't see the pain that broke me in two
When you tell me you love her
I wish you happiness with her
But you can't see that I'll love you forever
When you two break apart
I comfort you, and say "everything's gonna be alright"
But I can see that this cycle will begin again,
where I am never her
- by XxMoonlit BellaxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/27/2008 |
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- Title: When You
- Artist: XxMoonlit BellaxX
- Description: A Poem about a girl who loves her guy best friend, but her guy bestfriend loves another girl. So what else could she do? Nothing
- Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: heartbreak love pain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- hazuki-chan_14 - 07/29/2008
- wow, thats is really good! its so deep and awesome even though it is sad. 5/5
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- DarkRain2007 - 07/29/2008
- Wow! That was deep, It RAWKED!!!!
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- Ice_Bitten_Ecstasy - 07/29/2008
- good. #1
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- rock2space - 07/29/2008
- WOW THAT WAS WONDERFUL!!!!!
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- iiHyper_Alice - 07/28/2008
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hi sakura...
u have a really nice poem...
so sad tho..
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