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By: KJ
Out in the open,
We never talked, or chat,
While in private,
We never took a nap.
We went places,
We played games,
We hung out,
We changed names,
We took gambles,
We took bets,
We took lots of stuff,
But I never took my chance.
Of all the times,
Of all the whens,
I could never ask you out,
Or take a turn at teh bend.
My tongue was tied,
My knees were restless,
I sat along,
Waiting for that chance,
But when it came,
I never did take that chance.
To all those times I could've kissed you,
To all those times I could've hugged you,
Instead I just sat there,
Frozen in a field of blue,
I missed those chances.
When we talked about crushes,
I honestly thought I could do it,
But instead, I joked accordingly,
Because I thought you wouldn't agree.
But that time, I was so wrong,
And you set me free,
These jokes I now despise,
I missed my chance.
Now it all seems so fast,
As all these chances are past,
I'm too embarassed to talk to you anymore,
Because of the sole reason,
I missed all those chances.
- Title: I Missed my Chance
- Artist: TintedIce
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Description:
Well, I fell in love with my best friend, I always hung out with her, and everything, we even shared drinks, and foods, there was nothing that could seperate us. but then, I turned shy to her, I don't know why. I became jealous when she was around other guys, I really hope that she can see this..
Because we started out as friends, and I fell in love with a girl named Aya. I'm sorry for deserting you, I was too scared, but now I understand. I love you now. - Date: 11/16/2008
- Tags: missed chance
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Comments (7 Comments)
- sad-emo-angel-4-life - 12/06/2008
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woah you get to me i know what you feel like it
your poem makes me cry but it's happieh tears
i hope you win 5/5 - Report As Spam
- h0t_3m0_girl - 12/06/2008
- I know how you feel i always miss my change. even all the times i had a chance i missed them
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- XDZenLeeDX - 12/06/2008
- 5/5 for sure
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- x-C h ii b i A n g 3 l-x3 - 12/06/2008
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..dat reminds me of some1
anywayzzz
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- smol might - 12/06/2008
- cool smile
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- Alibis of the Heart - 12/06/2008
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I like it. The scheme for the poem could use a little improvment though. But otherwise it's very good at conveying those feelings. I can understand those feelings all too well... sad
If you want take a look at mine! - Report As Spam
- JeSs_WAZ_HeRE - 12/06/2008
- awww that ish cute, poor dude. i give it 5 stars!
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