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You took away my true love
When you slit your wrists
Pulled the trigger on that gun
He loved you like family
I love him so much more
He cried so hard
He missed you so much
I told him I was here for him
But I don't think he heard me
He was doing so well
I took away his despair
Washed away his fears
Comforted him of his scars
Wiped away the stain of tears
Then you took your life
And he fell farther than before
He followed you
I don't know why you did what you did
I wish I had known you
I'm so sorry
But did you have to take him too
His heart still beats
But he's no longer here
I don't want to hate you
But I thik I do
You've caused him so much pain
That alone saddens me
But worst of all
Though I still have him
And he still loves me
He didn't choose me
He chose you
So I make this heartfelt plea
Please
Give him back to me
- by tksunshine93 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/03/2008 |
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- Title: He Chose You
- Artist: tksunshine93
- Description: a few days ago my boyfriend's best friend killed herself, he's heartbroken and he's considering taking the same way out. I am trying to comfort him and convince him not to do anything but I can only do so much. I wrote this to his friend, I can't give it to her really but I hope where ever she is she hears my plea.
- Date: 11/03/2008
- Tags: chose
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Comments (6 Comments)
- wishbone theory - 11/04/2008
- That's really sad. Got me emotional. D:
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- Reaya1025 - 11/03/2008
- its real sad. i know what he's going through. my best friend died 3weeks ago. im still thinking should follow her. if he doesn't listen, make him talk to me.
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- xI-iPanda-Ix - 11/03/2008
- OH MY GOD!!!!that's funny, but not funny like that....but my exboyfriend's friend cassie went missing and he thinks she's dead and he's going through depression and is considering the same thing.......to end his life. well keep confincing him to think other thought!!!next time you see him and he tries to talk about it say "baby don't think that think happy thoughts......happy thoughts"
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- verisia213 - 11/03/2008
- although this poem has crushing meaning in everyway, it is a great poem...hold in there, and tell your boyfriend to as well. what ever his friends meaning, she probably did what she thought was best. never give up hope, because if he was truely her's, he would already be gone.
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- BannedAccount00300028096 - 11/03/2008
- omg!!! keep convinving him and dont give up hope......we are here too for you and you have the support to help him and keep giving him a reason to live.
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- pettitjosh - 11/03/2008
- I'm sorry. Keep on trying and you will succeed. That is no way out for anyone. Stay strong
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