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There once was a frog,
Who liked to hip hop,
He hopped and bopped until he dropped,
Once he hopped to high and fell,
Into a well,
So he quit the hop
and started to jog
THE END (Hope u liked it.. Please rate?) ^^
- Title: Hip- hop frog
- Artist: Zaara789
- Description: An animal poetry! xD
- Date: 11/26/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- slipknot_is_not_newby - 11/29/2008
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ROFL
5/5
check out my song - Report As Spam
- Serenity Tsukasa - 11/29/2008
- lawl 5/5
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- RisexWithxthexDead - 11/29/2008
- LOL thts funny XD
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- Zaara789 - 11/28/2008
- Thanks everyone for ur admiration n support so far!! xD
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- dorkifiedd- - 11/28/2008
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THATS SO CUTE<333
xD haha .
I love it . =] - Report As Spam
- Astictic - 11/28/2008
- I agree with Klaora, totally. It's very cute and creative.
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- Klaora - 11/28/2008
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Cute, the comment you wrote at the end of it killed it for me, though. x.x At least spell out "you".
It doesn't flow too well, but, hey, you actually paid attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation unlike every other poet in this category.
It's a little strange, the rhyme scheme, since it's not a limerick, but it has the feel of one. Points for creativity, but execution could've been better.
Overall, I like it. Good job. - Report As Spam
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