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You promise that we would never leave there
You said that we would live there forever
That I could have my friends so close and near
You said it so well, you were so clever
I can't believe that I fell for this lie
How easy I took the bait that you laid
How effortlessly you said them goodbye
How afraid I'm that there faces will fade
How could you leave so easy with no tear
Why do the tears fall so fast from my face
The pain you put on me you seem not hear
I long for the ones that I use to hold near
With a sad goodbye I left, I'm alone
Off to the lonely world I go, on my own
- by Singer LemonGurl |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: You promise
- Artist: Singer LemonGurl
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Description:
Its for my english class I really dont have a title its just temporary till i find a better one, I came up with this in like an hour and I'm just lookin for so imput so all comments are welcome (expect the mean ones!) So if you can please write a comment, Please thanks.
P.S. This is a format of a sonnet
- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: promise
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- Singer LemonGurl - 12/02/2008
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- Summer_Love0015 - 12/01/2008
- Very sweet! Love it! 5/5
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