Where it hurts the most

• Artist: Babiedoll56
• Description: This poem is what is the end of life but no it a new beginning. This poem is the feel for most kids that are going to lose or already lost a love one or more the one. I am losing my grandfather but I feel like I have know him for four years but he whom as know me for a eleven-years.
• Date: 07/15/2008
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Quote:

Said as if I was dead
As though I was gone
I lead to believe
I was at dawn
THAT A noise
That I heard but a voice
It change me forever
I never thought it was the truth
But in my youth
It was an adult word
And it was a word that haunted you
It was DEATH
They said you go to a place
It called heaven
Where god helps you and you help him
You go out on the limb
But to know whom
Who does it hurts the most
The adult BUT no
The kid

Comments

[musicalvendetta2]

I must say you need some serious help with your grammar. Sorry to be so harsh. It could be good if it made sense