Our Love

• Artist: aliienbunny
• Description: This is a poem I wrote in fourth grade, but has since been edited....quite a bit.
  Anyways, I hope you like it.....
  Please rate fairly. Also, If your going to just bash it, please keep those comments to yourself.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: love

Roses are black;
Blood is red.
My heart is cold;
His soul is dead.

Darkness is beautiful
Stillness is fine
I look into his eyes
And wish they were mine

Death surrounds us.
Can this be real?
His eyes are dead;
Grey like steel.

I'm sobbing, now.
His body's been laid.
The tears are rolling.
His debt's been paid.

I love him.
my one and only-
Jeremiah.

Comments

[Xxfallen midnight angelxX]

-claps-
That was good.
A definite 5!

[Argent Tirer]

Oh my....O_o that was really sad....but very very good. I loved it perfect score for joo!

[Lady Seinu]

Really sad... I like your style and the poem flowed really well... ^^; Who da heck would bash it anyway?!? Morons... >.>

[de Falla]

I love it. Its simple but quite beautiful which is quite lovely.