Societal Cancer

• Artist: Pain-Glory 666
• Description: This is just to check my talents in the fine art of poetry, and to show how I truly feel
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: truth

Societal Cancer

Many dreadful things pass, in the dead of night

Millions believe Evil is right

We have evolved into an impure mass

Now on our deathbeds we need a kick in the a**

The Societal Cancer is many things,

Including: War, Drugs and Crime

The cure is: Love, Religion, and Peace

That is the kick we need

Of course we cannot leave out Faith

Because false hopes are hard to face

Without the cure the Societal Cancer will consume our souls

And our bodies will turn to mold

Now is the time to heal

Or Evil becomes whom to we kneel

Comments

[Emer Morrisey]

Very nice. It shows some very obvious point that are and may be going on.
4.5/5

[Paper Crane Kiko]

its so true on so many levels! i give 5/5

[xXbloOdy_eMyXx]

the poem is nice =]

[FaithEmblem]

Now, while on some points I highly disagree, this is still a nice poem.

[HolySonata]

I love the message coming from this and how you rhymed so well. 5 stars