A Nicer Place to Share

• Artist: Vicky_The_Music_Girl
• Description: This poem reflects what I think would help push the world in a better direction and i hope you like it.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: anicerplacetoshare

The world is ours to shape and build,
So let's fix all our mistakes.
Let's heal the wounds the war has left
and do whatever it takes.
Let's stop polluting all our air,
Then help to feed the poor.
The world is ours to help and fix,
So let's all try some more.
Let's substitute our energy source,
Let's recycle our trash.
Let's volunteer some of our time,
And give charities with cash.
Let's find some strays some loving homes,
Let's build someone a home,
Let's all clean up a park or beach,
And make sure no one's alone.
If all of us could spare the time,
If everyone would care,
Then our Earth would be a better place,
A nicer place to share.

Comments

[sweet yukki]

whoo! go green! - i like it
lol..

[Rowscax]

what r u saying now that the oceans r colling climate change?????

[Sarudoshii]

I like your rhyme scheme. Rhyming has always been a personal favorite of mine, but the poem itself is good. I agree in the sense that if only everyone would spare a few minutes of their life to help out a bit, the world would be a bit better. Nice Job.

~Saru-chan