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I’m just a dog that wants to play,
I’m just a dog, who needs a friend,
Looking for attention,
Wanting to be in the crowd,
But finding myself wanting to do more
Than looking through a looking glass.
So I’m just a dog waiting to be lead
Inside a crowd or a conversation with friends,
But as I’m waiting for an open door
I sit; I walk back and forth,
And look to see if the door will open.
But, I’m just a dog
Waiting to speak, waiting to be heard.
But, can anyone really hear me?
Or at least know I’m there?
Should I bark louder than I do now?
Should I chase my tail to see if they notice?
But, can they really notice me scratching the door,
Like saying ‘let me in…
; please let me into your world.’
I’m scratching, I’m barking,
Can you hear me now?
Should I bark more and more to see if you hear me?
So I wait like a good dog,
The minutes turn into hours,
As I look through the looking glass the day is half over,
But I still wait for a sign of a door to open.
Finally, the day is over,
And as I lay there I dream for another day of happiness,
But knowing it will just be a dream
- by yuki_usagi87 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: i'm just a dog
- Artist: yuki_usagi87
- Description: just having a bad day!
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: dogbadday
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Comments (4 Comments)
- yuki_usagi87 - 07/20/2008
- please leave comments i want to know what you think about my poem.
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- sayuri46 - 07/17/2008
- wow! great job!
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- dark_usagi46 - 07/17/2008
- 0.0 that so dark! i love the way you use metaphor into your poetry very nice! and i notice you did use some simile that good. well keep up the great work!
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- Kawaii Katsy - 07/16/2008
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I like this. ^__^ Good job!
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