Don't let a moment pass by..

• Artist: Mother Ayame
• Description: I'm really excited about this poem. I have a lot of good reviews from my friends so I hope I can get the same here. Everything about this poem was meant to be inspirational. I wrote it to inspire people and of course there was somebody, well actually two people, who received this poem because me and my friends thoughts that they we're waisting away. Luckily, they both were inspired. So Enjoy..
• Date: 07/17/2008
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Every day we wake, to see the sun rise
The day goes by, right infront of our eyes.
Every moment ticking by
No excitement, we all sigh.
But wait, at last, the sun set.
To wake again is all we’ll get.
Day after day, all stays the same.
Nothing new, it’s always lame.
With every breath, we ascend.
just waiting for it all to end!
But, for now you live.
So go outside and be active!
and of whats left, make the best.
Until that day, in bed you rest.

Comments

[im now mehugzu]

well... im so-so on it. it wasnt bad, but we've all heard the same topic over and over. it wasn't long either. if you want to work in poetry or be a song writer, work at it a b it more.

[evil_dr_monkmonk]

wow done very nicely to get people of their backsides. 5/5

[Axumawi]

nice poem

[grl_hawk4422312]

omg i luv it it is sooo good