emo

• Artist: blue_kagome000
• Description: a depressed poem
• Date: 07/18/2008
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Death is like a
saver 4 those
who do not wish burning_eyes
to remain in this
sick ,cruel world,

and 4 those who
are not lucky unuff
to lay steal in there
coffins,

let the swift cut of burning_eyes
a razer blade do
the talking 4 them!

emo

Comments

[Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind]

Improper grammer, it doesn't flow, and there's too many spelling mistakes.

[hopstep]

i just wanted to add that i will be reading this out loud in my ap poetry class......... we are suposed to bring a poem that inspired us and i couldnt pick one well guess what i just did!! i hope thats ok with u?????? i will be sure to say its by blue_kagome000 plz pm me if thats ok

[madolche gelato]

It's hard to understand without proper grammar.

[hopstep]

at first i didnt understand
then it hit me like a brick wall and i started crying when i relized i felt the same way deep inside
this poem has spoken to me i am printing it and putting it on my wall for if i ever need to remind myself of that i'm not alone
thank you blue_kagome000 arigatou.............................

[Wyf]

im giving this 5 stars, everyone is a fallen angel they just dont know it xDD

[otimohoT]

this rly speaks to my inner tortured anime goth angel 666

[Reptar king of dinosaurs]

i lol'd