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Loving one another
Not finding
Only searching
still it didn't make sense
Hallow for the most part
I let the words flow
one day or another
I've listened, watched,
hunted, mistaken
that fooling around
with a person's feelings
felt right
made me feel superior
to them
Didn't happen
only made matters worse off
You probably wouldn't
have thought
that I'm purely that evil
in turn
I might be
I gave my trust to the level
headed ones
For all this
Didn't pan out right
searching for the light
never finding
I tried
hard enough
I fell
lost the battle
but the war is only beginning
in the mind
that never was.
- by Nostalgic Gryphon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: Teachings
- Artist: Nostalgic Gryphon
- Description: Another peom...off the top of my head.
- Date: 07/22/2008
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Atheshya - 07/22/2008
- THis poem seems bland to me. It would probobly be good to identefy the speaker, as well as the 'you'. Also, put some imagery into this, or something! There's a REASON why I think it's bland.
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