Dumb Fat Guy

• Artist: Slice of Oppai
• Description: Once again another poem I wrote in 97 while I was bored in school.
• Date: 07/23/2008
• Tags: dead death lonely sadness

Dumb Fat Guy

Head aching, stomach sore.
His overweight body falls to the floor.
No one to care for him,
Through life he must struggle and swim.
All of his life he has never fit in,
Because he is a loser that will never win.
The warmth of his breath fills the air,
He's dying but he doesn't care.
Life is better when your dead,
There is no one to hurt you or to mess with your head.

Comments

[xNibiaXxCrisisx]

wow,this is pretty good.
keep writing.

[wizardazure]

omfg are all of yours this good?@_@it rimes and fit together so perfectly,5 no doubt XD

[Orphen Dragonar]

Wow, makes you think twice about being overwight.
5 stars.