Final Fallen Snow

• Artist: Zaraki Kenpachi2234778
• Description: just a poem i wrote when i was depressed
• Date: 07/23/2008
• Tags: final fallen snow finalfallensnow sadness

The final fallen snow
to which hides all lies
given forth
a false sense of pride
those that were mighty
now lie in shame
for even the final fallen
cannot hide thy blame
The final fallen snow
all white and pure
with only one blemish
to which thier is no cure
to try and atone for ones past sin
only looking back
with a manical grin

Comments

[The Amethyst Riddle]

i really like it! ^_^ it's very pretty.

[La Cerise Noire]

i love it....but u might wanna check ur spelling.....

[Luna hanna]

you are very good!!
I like this one I can really relate to it smile