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i looked into her eyes
from 100 miles or more
they sparkled so bright in the sun
and when the clouds covered her
she was her own sun
just open up and let the rays out
and every day she went down to the lake
what magnificence she brought with her
wrapped around her like, oh,
like mist, reflective of every color
she put her hand in the water
and i hoped it would come this far downstream
so i could catch it in my hand
i'd always press my lips to the wind
and the wind to her lips
and back again
whispering kisses back and forth
nature herself jealous at our displays
we'd look at the moon together
and sing together, alone
a little off-key but still a personal harmony
i'd always hum a little tune
and she'd sing it onto the page
and we'd hang and echo
masked in a sort of glamour
one day i kissed her
"how long have you known me?"
and she kissed back
"tell me your name and i'll have known you forever"
- by HUMIDIFIER |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/23/2008 |
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- Title: soulmates
- Artist: HUMIDIFIER
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Description:
another love lyric, judge for yourself.
DON'T VOTE IF YOU'RE NOT GOING TO COMMENT - Date: 07/23/2008
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- jsophie - 12/17/2008
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I guess I'm just a sucker for love poetry.
You certainly have an intriguing style, kitty. <3 - Report As Spam
- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/26/2008
- why do you take every opertunity to insult people? anyway, your heart was in the right place for the poem but there was no real flow and it seemed too casual.id say 2.5 but i'll round it to 3
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/26/2008
- im not so fond of the casual, spoken tone of it but otherwise it is a decent free verse. 3/5
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- rosemidnight17 - 07/24/2008
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I thought the poem was beautiful. I am still jealous of your writing, ecspecially the ones filled with love. I can't pull those off with friggin plyers. Love the poem. Love the idea.
p.s.-rachmaster reminds me of you only slightly more harsh. D: - Report As Spam
- Rachmaster67 - 07/23/2008
- I'm sorry, but this is not true poetry, I do not think you are fit for being a poet. I just didn't feel any emotion or flow, it was like a dead thing, but please do try to let it flow when you write again. I read your other poems and this is what I have to say for them all. You just need a little more work.
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