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Thoughts Run through my mind
I look
Seek
trying to find answers
do you lie
are you cheating
using me in your
game
a toy
a pawn?
you smash
burn
LIE
Life the World
Red
-Massacred
and envious Monster
a beast
you are ruthless
UNLOVING
Crimson
Dark
Unloved path
thoughts Thicken
Something I crave for
food
drink
Love?
black and white
Alone
you bring me no peace
to my beating heart
shivers
cries
moans
Lies
crimson
lies
BAM-Kapow
Thoughts Multiply
thicken
Darken.....
blacken.....
Im not a toy
Just a
Doll...
Dead to the world
Reality Never
Finds
saves
relives
your painful vision
of love?
Peace?
Hope?
Will I live?
Die?
Move on?
Thoughts to deep
Vast for you to sail on
Empty
Un loved.
Pained
I scream
Thoughts
Terrorize me
However dark
and mysterious
this artwork is
its a game
and Im
a pawn
the pray
The Monster
It makes my head rumble
Only I know
Or do I?
- by Unwritten Remedy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/26/2008 |
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- Title: Questions
- Artist: Unwritten Remedy
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Description:
Just a poem I wrote at work because I was bored out of my mind. I also had so many thoughts running in my mind
driving me INSANE - Date: 07/26/2008
- Tags: empty alone peace starvation relationship
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Craven42 - 07/27/2008
- Very nice, very deep. You don't see many poems told like that, it gives it a very rich read.
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- ekitten614 - 07/26/2008
- It's very passionate, captures the insane feelings well. Great! I really like your freeform style, it suits the poem well.
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- ItsEarthChan - 07/26/2008
- wow... its just as good as mine...
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- GermanJohn - 07/26/2008
- ********. deep stuff there hun
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