"Suicide"

• Artist: Supernova Child
• Description: Just a little poem I wrote when in a depression. Describes how I felt when a certain person made me feel like I was nothing.
• Date: 07/28/2008
• Tags: suicide poem pain denial

Saying words that make me slit my wrists,
never thought you ever really meant it.
Staring down a loaded gun in question,
everything in my existence slowly rusting.
Can't find a good reason for my staying,
helping me pull the trigger to cause a stain.
Never knew the real me behind the lies,
just thought you would surely deny me.
So I sit and slowly watch it flow out,
quietly wishing I would be found out.
Nothing left in me to cover up and hide,
clearly seeing through all my lies I denied.
Ending everything with a single thought,
only needed to see the lights go out.
Breaking down on the inside of my mind,
holding up on the outside looking fine.
Is it any wonder I hold lose to life,
wondering what's on the other side.
You attempt to fix these broken pieces,
all my hopes scattered across the scene.

Comments

[alex_fray]

great

[JessAarons]

good

[Dugra]

Hmmm, very deep, but it kind of ends suddenly. I still like it though. xd

[The Beatnik Beauty]

that was very deep^^ good job^^

[Time is on our side]

That's Really good. Read my poem, It's Suscidial too xD Lmfao.