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Gone for Good
You left me to have fun
I let you go just to see you smile,
But you never forgot me.
I would wait by the phone every night
I know you’re sure to call,
You promised me that much.
Sure enough I hear a ring,
And your voice answers mine.
But you don’t sound happy now,
What has happened to your fun?
“We’ll see each other soon” I say
And only silence answers back.
What’s wrong I wonder,
What’s really going on?
Then you tell me the truth,
You’re not coming back
I don’t get to see you another day.
- by peacekitten65 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/02/2008 |
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- Title: Gone for Good
- Artist: peacekitten65
- Description: My boyfriend almost moved to Washington, I was so sad I just didn't know what to do. So I cried a lil as I wrote this poem. It hurt so much beause we already have so little time together becuse in two months he leaves for the army.
- Date: 08/02/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Ms Make Me Smile - 08/02/2008
- love it 5/5
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- Xx_Mako_xX - 08/02/2008
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I really liked this poem!!
it was very emotional and it has happened to me..
i basicly cried when i read this cause it was so nice..
like sweet little turtle said i hope u find get happy again smile - Report As Spam
- Sweet Little Turtle - 08/02/2008
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I really can understand you!!!
When I read these stanzas, I nearly cried as hard as you, because I thought about my boyfriend...
He's at the Armed Forces (is that right?) and I cannot see him very often...
But I know, he loves me and I love him, so I can be string enough...
If he really loves you, you could see each other, too...
I hope, you'll get happy again!!!!
These verses are very real... - Report As Spam