Alternate Reality.....

• Artist: Orange_Green4EVA
• Description: What would it be if our world was an alternate reality?
  
• Date: 08/02/2008
• Tags: realitylovealternatetime

What would it be if our world was an alternate reality?
What would we do,what would we see,
would I be you?and would you end up me?
What could I feel,what could I hold?
What could I love,and what things wpuld be told?
Would we have a future?
Would we have a past?
Or would everything be chosen,even our path?
Could I be loved,Could I be hugged,
Would I be held,Who could I love?!
But have you ever thought,that we could be
Actually In,an alternate reality?
Just like our games,everything fun,
Is it all fake,an expierement gone wrong?
Or are we pure,anad beautiful souls,
or are we just fake in a reality which is not are own.........................?

Comments

[ilovepink1984]

Cool

[Ospryan]

This really had potential, i really liked the simplicity of it yet it was flowing and harsh at the same time, word wise. However you have spelling and punctuation mistakes which ruin it. The ''.............................'' at the end was useless and annoying.