What is Love?

• Artist: pompoennetje
• Description: I had a couple of sentences that rhymes, and decided to make a poem out of it. I got this inspiration last night when I just couldn't sleep. To me, the poem seems a little confused. o.O But I think it's worth a try. :3 I know not all the words acctually really rhyme, But what normal word does acctually rhymes on 'heart'? o.O Anyway, I hope you like it. :]
• Date: 08/04/2008
• Tags: love happy heart sharing

A soft smile, A tought
And just a four letter word
So much feelings.
And hurtfull emotions.

Sharing your heart
Holding that one hand
Or a shoulder to cry on.
When you just need one.

A hand to dry your tears
A heart to vanish your fears
A touch, a song.
The way he tells you your wrong.

A voice that will tell you
"I love you too"
And "It's going to be alright".
Eyes that will make you smile bright.

Hating those tiny little things.
But loving the big ones.
Arms to protect you
When they need to.

Comments

[Chaotic_Theoretician]

Very, very nice! Beautiful. 5/5

Part, cart, mart, start, apart, tart all rhyme with heart, by the way. (It pays to have a rhyming dictionary.)

[kikim17_gairly]

so very inspiring

[Blanket-chan]

It's really nice and it meant something to me

[My 3rd Account]

I felt really sad after reading this, Nice Poem!

[pompoennetje]

Thank you! x3

[Kanijo-the-sage]

crying i loed it it is true ecsept for the guy part..................................................im so lonely