Ghost (a poem by me)

• Artist: fishyseaz
• Description: This is a poem i wrote about a ghost in my house. All of the events that take place is this poem is real!
• Date: 08/23/2008
• Tags: ghost sadder angry weird strange

The bold headed dead but two life creature showing up
out of no where,the cause of some sorrows. I just want
the bold headed creatures to say his sorries.
I think he was watching as i kissed the tree
and are you the one who i lost the key so you
can laugh at my persivarence of trying to get
back in my room? and are you the dead soul
who hid my hair bes behind the drawers?,
are you the one who made my black hair
ruffle easily dismentled? It's quite surprising
that would pick this house it feels like
im in an asylum of screaming monsters
some days.Well anyway i haven't seen
you in a year so alas!
(Please tell me if you like it or not?)

Comments

[Ishkir]

I think it's pretty good. It's not easy to turn a story to poetry but you did it

[Shieru Ritsuka]

that is not a poem that is just a story u tried to make a poem it was ok but didnt make much sence

[fishyseaz]

Than kyou for the nice comment. If you look through my posts youc an find more of my literture and I have improved from the last time I wrote this.

[xSyrenx]

awesome -- i do not have any ghosts but i have a friend that does and i have witnessed its acts -- it actually was running up and down my friends basements stairs -- i did not get to see it -- but man i heard it