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Love By Neko_Twizdid
Love surrounds us..
It's the best feeling, Best feeling.
But when its ends it brings deep pain, Deep pain.
It feels so good, So good.
But it's so hard to to reach, Hard to reach.
It's like a dream, Like a dream.
But in the end It's a nightmare, It's a nightmare.
Having someone to call truly yours, Truly yours.
But someone else could feel the same, Feel the same.
[[BTW it means like cheating e-e you didn't see anything..]]
Love is not immortal, Not immortal.
But heartbreak will always be surrounding, Be surrounding.
- by blissprism |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/25/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: blissprism
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Description:
Prolly not one of my best - I'm used to "emo" poems.
It shows the good and the bad ;3 - Date: 08/25/2008
- Tags: lovesadhappytwizdid
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Comments (1 Comments)
- 19PrinceAngel91 - 12/15/2008
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never put [[extra info]] in a poem..
put it at the end.
and its not very well writen
yet at the same time its got depth
3/5
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