suicide note

• Artist: evilangel4ever
• Description: i like writing these kinds of poems so dont be mean about it
• Date: 09/06/2008
• Tags: suicide note

you didnt care
you didnt know
it wasnt fair
so ill just go

you all ******** drove me
drove me to this action
you never cared
cause it was my satisfaction

you pushed me away
you left me alone
you made me cry every single day
and you didn't even know

it hurt me bad
you didn't see
the pain i had
the help i would need

don't cry when you see me
lying on the floor
with blood on my wrists
in front of the door

cause to you,i'm not worth it
you didn't really care
it wont hurt you one bit
to see me breathing no air

before you all scream cry and call 911
ill give you one more thing to do
look on the back of this
and read the note that says "******** you"

Comments

[ShySnowWhiteAnon]

erm....interesting and it flows well. I'm not sure it looks very astetically pleasing though.....sorry.......4/5

[Not So Lustrous]

I like it :p

[Matoe Style]

Good but would have been better if you worried more on sylables

[FallingthroughGlass]

Wow, that's actually pretty good. It is up front, and in your face but I kinda like it like that.

[DARKNIGHTANGEL96]

that was nice. i like it

[Ms Make Me Smile]

i love the way its totally honest and in your face.i know what your coming from and for that i give it 5

[kikioblack]

It's pretty good. Like the 'in your face' style.