Objects in the mirror

• Artist: UNKNOW dude ii
• Description: comments? and i'll comment back ^_^ woot win win
• Date: 09/23/2008
• Tags: objects mirror

I close my eyes
and hold on tight
I see you with me
you’re in plain sight

I’ve held you in my arms
a million times
for I am yours
and you are mine

Forever you are with me
until our eternities end
our love keeping us together
forever with you my time I spend

Only to open my eyes again
to see you are not there
I lay down alone
and in the mirror I stare

To see my lonely reflection
but someone else is here
your reflection lies next to mine
as in my heart you are closer than you appear

Comments

[Kat leya ii]

great! 5/5

[xXx_C H U C H U_xXx]

|points| Look over there! The best poet EVER!!

[Intimate Darkness]

Great Its Very Flowing 5/5

[hinatagirl1112]

ur art are excellent i wouldnt be surprised if u became a famous poet

[Taigamma]

nice.

[I123423433223]

this is a lovely poem. Your words flow, images pop and I can hear the words in my mind. 5/5

[pkelleyann29]

I think you would like my poem "It Dawns..crap.." it is close but I like yours better 5/5