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i jus got a chance 2 say biggrin
that im glad i met u 2 day
and thats more than i can say sweatdrop
pretty soon ill fade away 2 you redface
so tonite let us dance heart
let us say
let us waste the nite away
let us last in each others hearts biggrin
i pray ill see another day
- Title: why
- Artist: penguinhp
- Description: im trippen balls
- Date: 09/27/2008
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- collenable - 09/27/2008
- Dont listen 2 lady wats her face. I like the poem as it is. The emotocons are a little odd for a poem and as a tip you should let your words describe your soul instead of the emoticons.Poems do not need capitals or punctuation marks as many of Shakesperes did not contain punctuation or capitals.The poem itself is wonderful. Message me sometime and we can discuss poetry.Have a AWESOME day! : )
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- II iRose II - 09/27/2008
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Spell right
Use capitals
Emoticons look horrid - Report As Spam
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