His Pain

• Artist: CheshirexKitten
• Description: I wrote this recently when I was thinking, it started out as a poem about a heartbroken girl, but evolved into a poem about the girl and her lover who was very, very sick. He asked her to help him commit suicide, and so she did, because she wanted to free him from his pain and anguish. But, through the guilt and loneliness, she enherited his pain.
• Date: 09/28/2008
• Tags: pain assistedsuicide death guilt

She had been so many things
She had lost too many dreams
She looked to the sunset with dread
She longed for the rest of the dead

The rosy smile had long faded from her lips
She could still taste his so sweet kiss
But he was gone and she remained
left to sing the sad refrain

"The sun no longer shines on he
The moon won't rise for me
The darkness of death forever stains
But it ended his enduring pains"

She couldn't remember his face anymore
Or hear his voice right outside her door
He was gone so quickly from her life
He never told her his inner strife

But he looked to her in his final hour
Begging her to lend him her power
He'd been very sick for oh, so long
Now all she can do is sing his song

"The sun refused to shine for him
Life denied him well-deserved wins
He spoke to me, his voice so strained
Asking me to end his pains..."

The tears she cried have never waned
Her mind and her heart and her soul are stained
The smile on his face as he slipped away
Haunts her every single day

"I don't want the sun to shine on me
The moon lit sky isn't mine to see
I put the needle into his arm
The only way to ease what was harmed
His tortured body now lays at rest
He told me that it was for the best
But in my world it always rains
for I inherited all his pain"

Comments

[x_Lunar Eclipse_x]

This is very good! It is so sad.

[legaya the shadow]

good consept and good execution