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I look in the mirror,
But what do I see?
Red rimmed eyes,
From crying bitterly.
My cheeks are pure white,
I look like a ghost.
A parasite's in me,
And I am the host.
Shouldn't I do it?
Or should I not?
My mind makes itself up,
My heart's gone to rot.
The blade pierces flesh,
The pain leaves me shocked.
The cold of the blade
Was something I'd mocked.
On the cool concrete floor
My life slowly drips,
Taking with it the warmth
That had once touched my lips.
Should I say goodbye?
Should I leave a note?
It's too late for regrets,
Or a paper handwrote.
- Title: Bleeding
- Artist: AninOnin
- Description: This is kinda what I was like during the 7th grade of my life. Just so everyone out there knows, I have stopped cutting for 2 years now. That is a big accomplishment for me so I don't want to be hearing any crap outta the meanies of Gaia. K? Thank you, and hope you enjoy it.
- Date: 09/29/2008
- Tags: bleeding
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Comments (7 Comments)
- A Cats Curiosity - 11/11/2009
- This is a 5/5 but if your really cutting yourself then you need help.
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- Jamie Rayzon - 12/25/2008
- Were you really a cutter though? It's good that you stopped! Cutting is stupid.
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- AninOnin - 10/02/2008
- Wow. It hasn't even been up there that long and I'm getting support already. Thank you guys!
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- killer_klaw - 09/29/2008
- wow 5/5
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- xLaydieSkullx - 09/29/2008
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thats sooo deep and yeah its really good thing u stopped cutting. in my opinion i thik cutting urself is stupid. i mean think about it. how do u get rid of emotional pain by giving urself physical pain? anyways, great poem very incredibal 5/5 biggrin
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- Love Requiem - 09/29/2008
- wow, that was amazing. its wonderful that you don't cut any more ^^
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- The Love of Money - 09/29/2008
- Very well written in my opinion, and I'm glad you stopped cutting.
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