THE TRUTH OR THE LIE?

• Artist: LonelynessKillsSlowly
• Description: I wrote this as I was thinking of an ex that does not think a lot. And for all those who will and have told me lies. I have forgiven, but will never forget. I wrote this today just out of the blue I hope you like it. Please give me feed back and rate. Thank you <3
• Date: 10/05/2008
• Tags: lies susy

Tell me a lie
Forget my feelings
Greed
Pride
Back off
I don’t trust you
Push and push
Push into my skin
Into my heart
Sit
Push more and more
I believe in you
Betrayal
Deceit
Hatred
Leave me be in my darkness you created
Leave me alone in the hell I created
To wither away
The angles flee my dark heart
The anger, distrust in your words you speak
The hatred of your hurtful voice in my ears whispering your foolish lies to me
Leave me be for you are no more to me
Let me be in my hell I created for me
Let me be in my darkness that sucked my loving heart in, and the anger and hatred Perivale
The rope, the thoughts, your hand, my knife
What is the truth?
What can I believe?
Here I lay in my sorrow
Here I lay in my darkness
Here I lay in all that I believed to be true and wonderful that is now dust and ash of nothingness
The nothing in my heart for you
The nothing you created with your lies

Comments

[sportsgirl112]

ur poem is really good, but it is really sad.
I'm sorry u had to go through what ever inspired u to write that. But it is really deep and not about stupid potates(another poem on here) hope u have better luck in future relationships.

[Evil Y Goodness]

nice!

[yaya121]

luv it!

[Zayl Nightshadow]

Very nice, Susy.

[Shimmering Corruption]

i like it a lot. it is powerful

[My_Ballz_Ur_Mouth]

i really like it u should chech out mine