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Behind the eternal darkness
and all the torturous pain.
Behind the emotional chaos
and the tears that fall like rain.
Behind all the hurt and betrayal
there is one thing. Small and frail.
Hope
The feeling inspired by my love's voice.
The way I feel after I've made my choice.
Hope is the burning in my heart,
that keeps me from falling apart.
It is the warmth that floods my soul
that grants to me some self control.
- by Just Motions Without u |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/08/2008 |
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- Title: an edited addition of HOPE
- Artist: Just Motions Without u
- Description: this is the same as Hope but with another paragraph added on to it. I'm trying to improve and taking advice should help.
- Date: 10/08/2008
- Tags: edited addition hope
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Slayt Raven - 12/23/2008
- Taking advice was a good idea i like the added part. -nods in approval- xDD
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- Vampire_Nosferatu - 12/23/2008
- b-e-a-utiful!!!! brava! i wish i could come up with something so gordus...
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- janek p swiatek - 10/08/2008
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yes!!! it is perfect now
i dont think you can make it any better now
thanks for taking my advice
you did a really good job with the last paragraph
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- UniqueDarkness - 10/08/2008
- wow... thats really good. ^^
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