ghost

• Artist: Gregg505
• Description: idk...its goes with halloween...if you like it cool if you don't *shrugs* oh well
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: ghost halloween beds

I see a ghost upon my bed,
a little girl long since dead.
She look at me her eyes all wide,
exactly like before she died.
Fear and panic swept her face,
and she left without a trace.
Now she's know that she's been seen,
on this frightful halloween.

Comments

[Divine Tragedy]

Nice rhyming and rhythm.

[Kitten254]

sweet...or sweat....whichever means yummy goodness thats it....good job

[Ideophobia]

Creepy, but it could flow a little better. I would review my choice of words if I were you, but the over all feeling of this poem makes it a success!!! good job.

[Spartan1307]

That gave me goose bumps XD well done ! biggrin