Without You

• Artist: Jaz Neko
• Description: I wrote this one today in Psychology class and then I finished it in Western Civilization, so it's not as good as the others, but I liked it enough to put it on here.
  Also... like a lot of my poetry, it uses the same line a lot
  
  Like, "Without you"
  That's only used a lot...
  
  But I wanted to write a poem like this.
  Comments?
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: without

Without You

Without you, the truth
Is still an unknown
Without you, I'm nothing
And here, I'm alone

Without you, this world
Is nothing at all
Without you, My sky
Will crumble and fall

Without you, my dreams
Cannot be told
Without you, I'm lost
Inside I feel cold

Without you, this life
Is worthless to me
Without you, I'm captured
But with you, I'm free

Comments

[Kurai Tenshi_dark angel]

wow that is really good i love it!
and the thing is thats how my life is right now so it makes it seem even better

[- Innocuous Octopus]

wow, I really like this Jaz!

[tweetielv13]

you are a okay song writer