Missing You

• Artist: Loads Of Laughter
• Description: I don't know what to say about this poem. Read it. I like comments!
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: missing

Once upon a time you lived laughing in my life
And I. . . I knew it was right. . .
Your type of love was the best type of love.

And even now my heart misses
your kisses
because your kisses were the best kind of kisses.
(You had the sweetest lips)

My skin still tingles with the memory
Of your electric fingertips
running it's length. . .

And your strong arms
that would hold me
Ever so tightly.

My cold hands hunger for
the warmth of your chest
which underneath

A heart beats
for my breast misses your beats
beating across from it's beats.

And my ears want more to hear
your voice and breathing
For being so close to you and not speaking--

is sad.
And being so close to you
And not reaching into your brown eyes

with my green eyes, is sad.

Comments

[funfetti waffles]

Aww. This poem is sad, but I can relate.
You're such a good poet. <3

[Loads Of Laughter]

It can be sex, hugs, just laying and being so near eachother that you can feel the other's heart beats. All of that is amazing if your in love, and means so much.

[ninja yumi789]

yea so sad.at first when you said breast i was thinking sex...no wait this is better under the name missing your hugs

[katclover27]

I think that this is great. I like how you seperated the paragraphs. It makes me feel sad.