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Sitting alone up in her room
About to meet her impending doom
Tears in her eyes, in her hand a knife
She held up her wrist to take her life
"Who would miss me? Who would care?
Who would notice I wasn't there?"
She asked herself in the empty space
Mascara running down her face
She went silent at the ring of the phone
It was someone that she hadn't known
"Who are you?" was all she said
"The one who keeps you from being dead
You may not know, but I am here
Wherever you are, I'm always near
Don't do it my dear, you don't understand
That you're very needed on this land
So put up the knife and wipe the tear
And know that, for you, your friends are all here"
So the girl thought it over and took the advice
And afterwards, she felt pretty nice
Though all through her life she may never hear it
She was just saved by her guardian spirit
- by marksangelforever |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/15/2008 |
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- Title: Savior
- Artist: marksangelforever
- Description: I wrote this when one of my friends was going through a hard time...this is for her.
- Date: 10/15/2008
- Tags: savior
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Comments (6 Comments)
- bindyblueeyes - 04/30/2009
- i dunno for some reason i personally didn't like it but you wrote well and the idea is interesting but for some reason I personally didn't like it
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- xxDoomxxHeraldxx - 10/15/2008
- bravo, very nice. i'm sure she felt good when you showed her this.
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- jade_empriss - 10/15/2008
- its very good i like it. ^_^
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- Izzy of the Insane - 10/15/2008
- Hmm...something about it makes me dislike, but I'm not sure what... It's a decent poem though. Nice job.
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- Epic Bubblez - 10/15/2008
- ima tell meh friends bout it "the ones in real life" if datz ok
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- Scruffy_dog02 - 10/15/2008
- Gah! this is amazing!~ very beautiful, and i love the whole idea of it and also the gaurdian angel thing~ very pretty... tgho it did sound odd in some places, i'll still give yu a five anyways <3
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