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this is a song i wrote about a special girl to me. tell me what you think about it please!
my world was so dark
but you lit it up with your eyes
it was tried so hard
to hold my head up high
then first time i saw you
you gave my heart a surprise
all i want to do is be with you
because your the only one who can
Melt away my sorrows
kiss away the pain
help me fill this heart thats hollow
take away that shame
love me like no other
and give meaning to my name
and help me find the stars tonight
my lungs were filled with regret
i breathed it every day
my heart felt so empty
all it held is pain
my whole body felt so black
from being so blue
but now there is one thing
i want from you
Melt away my sorrows
kiss away the pain
help me fill this heart thats hollow
take away that shame
love me like no other
and give meaning to my name
and help me find the stars tonight
i was feeling so distorted
so out of order
nothing ever seemed to go my way
everytime i tried ask you
i couldnt get out your name
now im wondering what to do
if my hope came true
for you to
Melt away my sorrows
kiss away the pain
help me fill this heart thats hollow
take away that shame
love me like no other
and give meaning to my name
and to help me find the stars tonight
- by Firomaniac |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/15/2008 |
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- Title: melt away my sorrows
- Artist: Firomaniac
- Description: love, pain
- Date: 10/15/2008
- Tags: melt away sorrows
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Starla Astrum Night - 03/20/2009
- dude you are lucky enough to be able to write this well took me years of practise and i'm only at best half as good as you
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- katclover27 - 10/16/2008
- You had the luck to have this song come into your mind so I think you have at least some. Your are also very welcome for the comments.
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- Firomaniac - 10/16/2008
- thanks but there isnt much luck in me.
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- katclover27 - 10/16/2008
- Keep working on it. The music will come to you. Good luck!
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- Firomaniac - 10/16/2008
- im working on the music now. its not coming around as easy though
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- katclover27 - 10/15/2008
- Did you make a tune for the song?
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- katclover27 - 10/15/2008
- I love this so much. It is so sweet. I love it. I can just.... it is wow. Did I say that I love it?
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