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to be one that is incomplete,
i always wonder who i would meet.
my other half i still long to find,
i have not any image of her in my mind.
is being alone always felt this bad?
i'm not happy now, nor i'm sad.
because one day i know i'll meet her.
and from that day on we shall be together...
and be a complete soul...
me and her...
forever...
- Title: completeness
- Artist: St Mario
- Description: to find one that completes me
- Date: 10/20/2008
- Tags: completeness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Jarmis - 04/12/2009
- Pretty good. The idea has been done a million times, but it sounds honest, and it's not a bad read. Keep writing, I'd love to read more smile
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- St Mario - 10/23/2008
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i'm not making all my poetry on purpose.
i just want to share what i have
what i feel
thank you all for willing to share this with me
my most gratitude...
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- danieldark1 - 10/20/2008
- awesome
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- St Mario - 10/20/2008
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thank you guys smile
i never really thought about it...
the words just came across my mind this morning.
thank you for all the positive comment
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- Chishio Tenma - 10/20/2008
- pretty good.
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- sublime_necromancer - 10/20/2008
- It has good structure.
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- Joonbong - 10/20/2008
- Awesome. How touching.
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